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- 21. Jul. 2006. @ 14:28:49
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trolly
- 21. Jul. 2006. @ 14:37:19
thanks
i kinda hesitated to use the word fuck...but, it's a poem about reverence, about really revering somebody and their body and actually fuck was absolutely the right word in this context. and it rhymed of course...
trolly x-
- 21. Jul. 2006. @ 15:04:07
I heartily agree - nothing wrong with a strategically and thoughtfully placed f*ck every now and then! ;o) x
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trolly
- 21. Jul. 2006. @ 17:12:36
trolly x -
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suzeemoon
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- 21. Jul. 2006. @ 18:48:20
Yup! Sometimes nothing but a f**k will do...
Gorgeous poem.-
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trolly
- 21. Jul. 2006. @ 18:57:09
thanks...
just wait til Mr Trolly sees it...
trolly x-
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suzeemoon
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- 22. Jul. 2006. @ 12:53:08
I hope you get just what you deserve... 
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- 24. Jul. 2006. @ 18:42:49
Beautiful beautiful beautiful. And i find the word fuck is what makes it even more powerful, makes the intagible feeling of love something concrete/physical/real (yes, I am an english teacher)
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trolly
- 25. Jul. 2006. @ 09:14:46
thanks.
trolly x -
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